Zeba Khan

  Hi Zeba,   Your group’s webpage focusing on the interplay of food and body during the elderly years of the female population was informative. I was able to read the material and digest the information that was provided with ease. I love the use of pictures and videos throughout, they seemed to be strategically placed so that the information provided via text was enhanced. There were a few errors that I came across, and I’m sure it was probably just due to lack of proofreading one last time before submitting. There were some grammatical areas throughout, where words were left out of the sentences (i.e. of/and). I also noticed that under a few of the digital images, the complete reference was underneath instead of just a citation. So even after you’ve checked your work, just check it one more time! With my group, we’ll make sure that everyone reads through the webpage before submitting, but we still miss things sometimes! LOL Despite those few minor mishaps, this webpa...

  Hello, Zeba; here is a summary review of the website activity you and your teammates wrote on the interplay between food and body. The information included in your website activity was informative and backed up with data and visual representations. The headings leading to the paragraphs also indicate what the paragraph will address.  The fitness guidelines were very informative, with the information in the paragraph linked to falls due to decreased balance and fall prevention through environmental modifications.   Overall, your website activity addressed the points required for this assignment. My recommendation would be to include types of exercises that could improve balance when mentioning safety tips to prevent falls. In addition, some of the wording on the charts are not legible enough. Nonetheless, great job! 

  Hello Zeba I enjoyed reading your page on older adults and food/ nutrition . The web page is clearly titled and infographs and videos are very informative . The introduction addresses changing needs of older adult women and the food pyramid effectively reflects their age-appropriate nutritional requirements. The video regarding healthy eating in older adults is fabulous. I also liked the infographs regarding sexual diff erences in age related diseases. The fitness guidelines and associated video look great and hit the topic well. The protective factors are done very well and establish the relationship between resilience and social support and food/ nutrition .   H owever, the risk factors content does not seem to be linked to the topic of discussion which for this section was- “ the triggers and pressures that can lead someone to have negative body image and disordered eating among women, and analyzing the relationships between food, body, and health across the...

Adulthood Psychosocial Female Mind                All of the elements for this unit were addressed on the website and I do not believe that anything is missing. I really enjoyed the pictures that were included in the sections because they allow us to grasp the information better. Instead of listing all of the statistics, it was nice to see it visually. I also thought it was very helpful that you guys included a little section after each picture that explained its relevancy to your topic or section. The essential elements were organized and clear for the reader to follow. I did not see any grammatical errors on the website sections. The writing style was clear and the paragraphs and sentences were cohesive. The topics were covered through the pictures, writing and the videos as well. I feel like I benefited from reading this section because I felt it useful for me currently. It was interesting to learn more about my current age period and ever...

 Hi Zeba  I reviewed "the psychosocial aspects in young women section" I thought that you guys did an excellent job with this section, I liked all the pictures and text regarding the psychosocial aspects in a young adult female. The page is visually appealing . The information is concise and meaning ful and the page is sectioned into required subheadings and is pulled together in the end with a conclusion that succinctly pulls together the information on the page. The info graphs are effec tive in providing information about this stage. I really like the graph that shows social life struggles in young women and the cognitive changes in a woman and the regarding motivation at various life stages. It is true that “a picture is worth a thousand words “and the pictures and infographics in your section have successfully provided that information. However I am confused about your use of the video regarding the research about the effect of estradiol on women's ...

 Hi Zeba, I really enjoyed reading Unit 2's website submission from your group. The use of headings and media helped with the flow of reading. I would use more citing however, for instance on the first paragraph under the heading "Psychological factors" when you linked social media to anxiety and depression. Also, according to APA format, if you use a direct quote you should always cite a page number ( in_text_citations_the_basics.html ). I thought the use of the linear graph discussing self-esteem, shyness and social anxiety was really neat- I've not ever looked into that aspect. Thank you for posting that, I learned a lot with that. A few grammatical errors were noted, for instance on the caption of that graph there was a " used at the end of the sentence, but nowhere else to show where the quote started. I would be careful to state thoughts/opinions like "women are wanting to get married in order to start a family" without backing that up with resear...

Thank you, Zeba, for sharing this insightful webpage for the childhood life stage related to women’s health. Over the week, I have watched the transformation of this webpage by efforts of you and your group, adding significant details for continued improvement to your perspective sections.  I appreciate such details as this gives readers confidence in the information that is shared. The website design is aesthetically pleasing and provides easy-to-navigate information.  All the required elements were included and explained well.  The initial statement was a strong lead-in for describing the theme as gender differences during the childhood stage.   Throughout the webpage, the writing style is clear and without redundancy.  No known grammatical or spelling errors are noted.  Terminology is easy to understand and user-friendly.  This webpage offers information useful to community, related practitioners, and medical professionals.  I noticed that...

I appreciate the information you provided on the adolescence female body. Information regarding male versus female body was very concise.     I learned the difference between males and females in the adolescent years. The first video you provided was very helpful in helping me understand the female versus male body. However, I would recommend for you to have a caption explain what the video is about, so the audience knows what to expect before watching the video. This will also allow the audience to know why the video is important to the content that you have shared.     Although you shared some important information on puberty for male versus females, I would suggest adding subheadings to separate each paragraph. Including subheadings is essential in order to guide the audience in understanding why different topics are being shared regarding adolescent years.     I liked that you shared images regarding what the female body goes through during this time pe...

 Hi Zeba! I appreciated how the first thing that I saw when clicking on your webpage was a visual of children and the age range that would be discussed. However, that seemed to be the only heading that was provided. A recommendation for the improved structure of the webpage would be to include subheadings that will introduce the readers to the information that will follow. I also liked how you did not make one big paragraph of writing, but instead split them up into manageable portions to allow for better ease of reading. One suggestion is to make sure that you proofread your work before submitting/publishing. There were a few grammatical errors throughout the writing, which caused me to have to add in words that were missing when reading. Another recommendation would be to utilize transitional words throughout your writing. Some of the paragraphs didn’t flow well, and I think a transitional word would’ve brought everything together.   I appreciated how the information on your...