Feedback Unit 2

I appreciate the information you provided on the adolescence female body. Information regarding male versus female body was very concise.  I learned the difference between males and females in the adolescent years. The first video you provided was very helpful in helping me understand the female versus male body. However, I would recommend for you to have a caption explain what the video is about, so the audience knows what to expect before watching the video. This will also allow the audience to know why the video is important to the content that you have shared.  Although you shared some important information on puberty for male versus females, I would suggest adding subheadings to separate each paragraph. Including subheadings is essential in order to guide the audience in understanding why different topics are being shared regarding adolescent years. 

 

I liked that you shared images regarding what the female body goes through during this time period. The pictures are clear and placing them after sharing information on puberty makes it clearer why the images are important. However, I would suggest having a caption under the images which would allow the readers to know why these images are important and how they relate to the content that you have shared. I also noticed that most of the information presented is on puberty. I would have loved to see more information on how puberty affects females versus males and how these changes can present challenges. I would also share more information on menstrual cycle affects females at this age and some of the concerns females may have due to their menstrual cycles. I enjoyed that you shared evidence- based information and really informative references. I was able to look through  some of the references that you provided and learn more about female adolescent years.

 

Overall great information. I look forward to learning more. 

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