Feedback Unit 5

 Hello Brittany


 

I really enjoyed learning more about conventional medicine. You provide detailed and coherent information on the topic presented. I enjoyed about your post is learning more about the diagnosis and how it impacts females in adolescent years. I also enjoyed that you provided a paragraph that shares more information regarding conventional medicine and how it impacts people. You did a great job defining conventional medicine and how it impacts adolescents. You also shared some evidence -based data on how adolescents rely on traditional medicine to make changes in their life. I also enjoyed that the pictures were clearly labels and describes how the pictures are related to the content. The video are also very informative and share quality information regarding adolescents. One thing I noted was that I would add more information regarding how females are impacted daily due to the lifestyle choices they make as well as the impact it has on them. I also think citations could have been improved. I noticed some errors in citations. For example, one of the citations needs to be italicized. I really enjoyed that there was a quote posted below the tittle of the Weebly blog. I think this a great way to capture your audience attention because you provide detailed information on how conventional medicine impacts females in their adolescent years. Overall great post! I really enjoyed reading it. 

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